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Monday, April 30, 2012

मौसम


कभी सफ़ेद कभी हलके रंगों में,
सिमट के आती है वो !
गर्मी के मौसम को भी, 
ख़ूबसूरत बनाती है वो !!
हर सुबह बालों को बाँध कर,
जब घर से बाहर जाती है वो,
ठंढी चाँदनी सी रास्तों में फैलाती है वो,
गर्मी के मौसम को भी ख़ूबसूरत बनाती है वो !
तपती धूप में मुझे देख कर,
जब धीरे धीरे मुस्कुराती है वो, 
राग मल्हार की याद दिलाती है वो,
गर्मी के मौसम को भी ख़ूबसूरत बनाती है वो !
कभी सफ़ेद कभी हलके रंगों में,
सिमट के आती है वो !
मेरे हर मौसम को, 
ख़ूबसूरत बनाती है वो !!

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140 comments:

  1. Wonderful! Saru,

    Enjoyed the flow..

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  2. can be a good material for a soft romantic gazal!

    nice one it is :)

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    1. I wish someone sings my poem. Thanks for an encouraging comment dear :)

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  3. "raag malhar ki yaad dilati hain woh.."

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    1. I knew you would like this line Dip. Thank you so much for reading :)

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  4. "जब धीरे धीरे मुस्कुराती है वो,
    राग मल्हार की याद दिलाती है वो.."

    बहुत ही खूबसूरत लिखा है आपने!! आपकी लेखनी हिंदी में भी उतनी ही बढ़िया है.. :)

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    1. बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद् !

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  5. मासूम का सुन्दर रंग बिखेरती
    आपकी यह भावमय प्रस्तुति
    बहुत ही खूबसूरत लगी.

    सुन्दर हिंदी लेखन के लिए बहुत बहुत बधाई.

    समय मिलने पर मेरे ब्लॉग पर आईएगा.

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    1. कविता पढ़ने और आमंत्रत्न के लिए धन्यवाद् !

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  6. Beautiful lines. I am a fan of such Shayari and have attempted a few myself. :)

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    1. Good to know that dear, will surely read it.

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  7. बहुत खूबसूरत!

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  8. वाह! रूमानी एहसास हैं....

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  9. बहुत ही ख़ूबसूरत रचना सरू ...और आशा करता हूँ इस रचना को पढने के बाद , जिनके जीवन में प्यार है उन्हें गर्मी का एहसास शायद नहीं होगा :)

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    1. बहुत खूब कहा आपने ! प्यार से हर मौसम खूबसूरत हो जाता है ! सुन्दर टिप्पणी के लिए धन्यवाद् !

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  10. हर रचना को खूबसूरती से पिरोती सारु :)
    सदा मनभावन रचना ले आती है वो ...

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    1. आपकी टिप्पणी भी आपकी लेखनी की तरह सुन्दर है, इंदु ! धन्यवाद् !

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  11. Very loveable and beautiful lines they are, Saru! Made me smile all the way! :D

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  12. So tender & loving--beautiful lines!

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  13. Adoring the fines beauty through words ..:)

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  14. जीवन के बेहद महत्वपूर्ण पक्ष को आपने इस कविता के माध्यम से अभिव्यक्त किया है ....! सशक्त रचना ..!

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    1. कविता पढ़ने और सुन्दर टिप्पणी के लिए धन्यवाद् !

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  15. Wow!! The whole description has been so beautifully woven...I love this.

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  16. गर्मी के मौसम को भी ख़ूबसूरत बनाती है वो !कभी सफ़ेद कभी हलके रंगों में,सिमट के आती है वो !
    cool

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    1. आशा है आपको कविता पसंद आई ! इस ब्लॉग पे आपका स्वागत है !

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  17. a beautiful poem .. MaUSAM indeed

    how the world would be if there were no Mausam's ...

    Bikram's

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    1. Yeah, true. Like these seasons we have various shades in life. Thanks for reading Bikram.

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  18. I don't read hindi poems and stories quite often coz I never seem to like them. But, I read this poem several times and loved it. Nice flow and nice words. Great work . . .
    Keep writing . . .

    Ashwini Dey

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    1. That's a huge compliment. Thanks for reading Ashwini...:) :) :)

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  19. Woww! Loved the closing lines especially :):) Beautiful as ever Saru :)

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    1. Thanks Harsha. You know I love the picture here more than the poem. :)

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    2. Me too! Even I wondered how could you find such an apt pic. :)

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  20. So soft and beautiful Saru... :-)

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  21. don't know why but reminded me of that song "Ghar se nikalte hi, kuch door chalte hi..."

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    1. Good to know that. Though this poem is not that great but if it evokes the memory of a beautiful song, I am thrilled

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    2. ditto sujatha.... :)
      poem is as beautiful as the song is..

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  22. Very lovely.
    Mausam being compared so beautifully is amazing Saru. Kaabile taareef hai :)

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  23. अनुपम भाव संयोजित करती हुई बेहतरीन अभिव्‍यक्ति ।

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    1. सुन्दर टिप्पणी के लिए धन्यवाद् !

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  24. Masha-allah.. Flow of the words is so magical:)

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  25. Saru Ji

    Simple yet exquisite & beautiful. Pure magic.

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    1. Thanks for admiring the beauty of the written lines. :) :) :)

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  26. Beautiful poem. Perfect lines for the summer season. Loved it as always. :)

    माफ़ कीजिये सरूजी इस बार मेरी राय देने में तोड़ी देर होगई. :(

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    1. No problems, Akshay. I always know that you are busy with your work and life. Thanks a ton for reading and liking the poem. :)

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  27. Awesome - I could actually feel the romance in the air :)

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    1. Awww...That solves the purpose of writing the poem. Thanks Me..:)

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  28. u crazy girl--that is a gender bender poem! How could you write with the romantic heart of a guy? Smiles...how do you manage to have fluency in both English and Hindi--you write artistically in both languages?

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    1. It's all about feelings, Bhavna. And many thanks to the romantic movies which feed these lovely thoughts in my mind. Thanks for appreciating the work. Truly honored!!!

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  29. oh..wow..lines from the heart...lovely..:)
    Tasty Appetite

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  30. very beautiful!! lovely lilt!! would love to hear it!! you should upload a recital of your poetry..

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    1. I wish someone can recite or sing it for me. I am not so good at reciting my work. Thanks for a lovely suggestion and for liking it, Sir. :)

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  31. Wow!...absolutely b'ful poem, Saru, 'ठंढी चाँदनी सी रास्तों में फैलाती है वो' is par excellence!

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    1. ...am here again to read it once more:)
      The accompanying pic is pretty cool:)

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    2. Sir, even I like the picture a lot, it is exactly what I thought while writing the poem. Thanks for liking that line, I wrote this and malhaar line before and then wrote the entire poem. Means a lot to be appreciated by you...:)

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  32. read thrice, felt it... closed my eyes for a second and rhym it... big five for this one.... so so so beautiful....

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    1. Awww...I think I will read it your way to re-live the poem. Thank you so much for a lovely comment. :)

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  33. बहुत सुन्दर रचना है सरू जी

    शब्दों को ऐसे सजाती हो तुम
    कविता यू बनाती हो तुम
    दिल से लगता सुनाती हो तुम

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    1. इतने सुन्दर शब्दों के लिए शुक्रिया ! आपकी टिप्पणी ने इस कविता की शोभा बड़ा दी !

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  34. Wonderful Saru...beautiful lines.

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  35. kaun? :P :D

    Nice one!


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. :) Kaash pata hota...:) Thanks for reading Anshul...:)

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  36. आपका गीत हवा के झोंके की तरह आया और चला गया . कुछ समय बाद ये एहसास हुआ की मैं वहां पर अब न था . मैं तो हवा के उस झोंके के साथ बह गया था .

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    1. क्या बात है ! ऐसा लगता है मानो किसे ने कविता की परिभाषा ही बदल डाली है ! कविता पड़ने और सुन्दर टिप्पणी के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद् !

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  37. So soothing, serene and touching. Simply adorable words and they flow like a river! As always. :) I have always had a unique admiration for poets. Because to be a poet, you need to have a combination that is so rare to have: a fertile mind, a pure heart and a perfect language. And as I have told you before, you are the best poet I will ever know. :)

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    1. Speechless!

      Even in your comments you make very sure that you show your writing genius. Thanks for gracing this blog, Raj.

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  38. Thanks for visiting my blog.
    We are visiting US(New York) in May.
    Where are u in US,Saru.

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  39. nice............
    really beautiful..........
    anu

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  40. I am not getting updates from your post. Actually i am not getting updates from so many people :-(

    The poem has etched a figure in my mind, and somewhere reminds me of madhuri from Dil to pagal hain. Soothing and beautiful!

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    1. Ah, Madhuri looked so beautiful in that movie. And it is such a motivating comment. Thanks a ton Jenny!

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  41. Hi Saru, I like your writing a lot..

    I know you've been appreciated several times, here goes another:
    http://life-stance.blogspot.in/2012/05/my-first-ever-blog-award.html

    :)

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    1. Thats so sweet and nice of you. Feels great, thanks :)

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  42. For all the guys madly in love, this is how you feel when your partner appears in front of you! :)

    Great poem Saru.

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    1. Thank you Binu. I wanted to create an image with this poem and feels great that I succeed to an extent.

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  43. Dear Saru,
    I'm inviting you and your friends to join me this Saturday May 5th for Blog Hop Saturday!

    I'm also having another collaboration. I know you just missed out participating last year, so I'm giving you early notification. It will be held over at my new blog Lovers' Cove Hope you can join all the fun!

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    1. Sorry, I missed the Saturday Blog Hop but we make sure to be a part of the Lover's Cove. Thanks for the invitation Andy :)

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  44. an enticing poem..while i was reading this,the poem made the song-'ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga....' reverberate in my ears:):) beautifully written!

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    1. It is a soulful song and glad to know that this poem reminded you of that. Thanks for reading and for a beautiful comment.

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  45. Saru, Its beautiful :-)

    Nice to read Hindi poem after so long!
    Wish to read many more like this ...

    Keep writing :-)

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    1. Simran, please feel free to explore the hindi poems tab on the top of the blog. Hope you will enjoy it. Thanks for reading!

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  46. now i don't have the ability to decode the message with this poem! this wasn't that Saru-Kinda-Poem... :( sorry! for disappointing you with this comment...

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    1. I should be saying sorry for disappointing you as a reader. Thanks a ton for an honest feedback!

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  47. बहुत ही सुंदर प्रस्तुति । आप तो भूल ही गई पर मैं आपका भुल नही पाया हूँ । मेरे पोस्ट पर आपका इंतजार रहेगा । धन्यवाद ।

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    1. ज़रूर सर ! टिप्पणी के लिए धन्यवाद् !

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  48. How beautiful and lyrical, Saru :)

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  49. Hi,

    I know you've got appreciations before, but guess you deserve it again and again :)

    please check http://anupampatracontemplates.blogspot.in/2012/05/non-stop-generosity.html

    Regards,
    Anupam

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  50. Please check :)http://iamdirtyineedwashing.blogspot.in/2012/05/sunday-blogging.html

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  51. राग मल्हार की याद दिलाती है वो...Simply beautiful! :)

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  52. "...और हिंदी में भी क्या खूब लिख जाती है वो :)
    On a serious note.... really nice!!

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    1. Thanks a lot, means a lot coming from you...:)

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