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Monday, October 24, 2011

A Journey


Like wanderer on a smoky road,
My soul was filled with doubt.
Loaded with complex emotions,
I 'searched' for my whereabouts...
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59 comments:

  1. Interesting Piece of Poem ...

    Thanks a lot Dear for Ur Warm Diwali wishes.

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  2. Okis :) me heading to Subhrasis's blog...>:)

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  3. As humans we so over complicate things. That's what this poem means to me.

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  4. Mysterious...and looking for the next part of it :)

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  5. Wow.. you captured the journey of life so exquisitely! :) And yeah.. u love trading in the stock market? That is very interesting. :)

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  6. :) All the journeys we take begin and end from within.

    Lovely.

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  7. My soul was filled with doubt.
    Loaded with complex emotions,
    I 'searched' for my whereabouts...


    अरे दीवानों, मुझे पहचानों,कहाँ से आई ,मैं हूँ कौन
    मैं हूँ कौन,मैं हूँ कौन ,मैं हूँ कौन
    मैं हूँ 'Saru', मैं हूँ 'Saru', मैं हूँ ,मैं हूँ ,मैं हूँ 'Saru'.

    Nice search Saru.
    You are really "saru" only.
    Thanks for this beautiful philosphical expression.

    Heartily best wishes to you on Dipawali.

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  8. it happens! a delufe of complex emotions often confound you...

    "but the mists lift up again
    and we learn ...
    that life is richers
    when seasoned with pain"..

    nice read :)

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  9. Nice words saru :)
    Wish you a very happy and prosperous diwali !
    Hope you have a beautiful year ahead.
    Stay blessed.

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  10. Life is a journey of questions and seeking to unravel the answers ... nice read, Saru :)

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  11. life a journey and a search....goes on n on n on....lovely pic...:)

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  12. That was so concise, realistic and touching Saru. :):) Wish you and your family a very delightful Diwali! God bless. :):)

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  13. Love the metaphor of the path and life! Wonderful words.

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  14. Happiness is always from within. The most cherished one too :)

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  15. I Read your poem in "KHOJ"; It's a kind of a fun to re-live life through words. Am i right???

    From: sriramnivas.wordpress.com

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  16. Nice one once again Saru.

    Life does happen when life seems to be a broken ship after all tried and tested methods.

    A positive poem which will linger on my mind for quite sometime now:)

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  17. Great! striving towards poetic perfection..

    Life in its sphere of discovery & perceptions,
    Life is a conscious force & special action,
    which enables to hold apart the relations,
    Nature seeks the harmony & offer best of luck..

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  18. Nice lines...search is the root of life:-) Happy Diwali!

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  19. This is very beautiful Saru... The essence of life told in 16 lines :)

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  20. Just 4 lines but has deep meaning in it!
    Splendid :)

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  21. Saru u just summed up the way my heart feels at this moment...just wonderful :) :)

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  22. You write so good about life Saru!
    Wonderful:-)<3

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  23. Saru , as long as you command the ship of life, it will sail in all turbulence!Beautifully penned

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  24. Lovely message...happiness from within :)

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  25. An excellent poem to read.
    Wish you happy and prosperous Deepavali

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  26. True Saru...we keep searching and do we find it!
    Must be like the deer with the fragrance within...
    Happy Diwali dear:)

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  27. really encapsulates the emotions of a traveller. And travelling is one thing that i am insanely passionate about. they always say, its the journey that matters and should be enjoyed as much as the destination. in essence life is a journey and i try my best to enjoy it:) thanks for putting that into words:)
    Happy Deepawali n a prosperous new year:)
    take care

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  28. Hello.
    Such is the journey of life...happy heart & everything else fits into place.

    Nicely done Saru!
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. Much appreciated.

    Printed Pages

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  29. Yes Saru, life is indeed a journey and it was lovely traveling with you, no matter the twist and turn!

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  30. As always so soothing. Your "WORDS" are always magic.

    P.S Thanks for following my blog.

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  31. Awesome post - you left us hanging for more... Off to read it at Subhrashis blog :)

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  32. you have said it all right ms.Saru..short but you have captured every thought..so true our journey in our lives includes having one step in a world full of uncertainties..we don't know where our steps on our life's journey will lead us..we have a lot of questions that's sometimes makes our lives complicated but the best part of it is..we are still blessed to have the "gift" of life and whatever uncertainties that lies ahead the best thing to do is move on and step forward to the fulfillment of our destiny ;)

    passing by with a smile :)

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  33. Beautiful poem..capturing the journey of life with the message that all we need to do is look inside..I loved the happy ending..of the khoj!

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  34. Such a beautiful poem, Saru. It's so wonderful to read your thoughts and the way you've expressed them! Totally empathise with every thought.

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  35. JUST WANTED TO WISH A VERY HAPPY DIWALI TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY, SARU :)

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  36. Awesome Words... Its like many people are Lost in this world.. They go oon the life path where they dont ever want to go, and wont go on the life path which is meant for them, and The Creator has made that path... But atleast there are people who knows the path... This lines suits them perfectly...

    http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/

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  37. Amazing words Saru...and nice picture too

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  38. you always wrote so nice, creates an interest to come again and again on your blog.

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  39. very nicely written one word awasome :)

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  40. Its Purpose that unveils the journey, destination and our ventures I guess. Very well written!

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  41. gr8 lines.. made me browse through up and downs in the life..

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  42. lovely words and nice image!!

    http://sushmita-smile.blogspot.com/

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  43. I hope you have a "happy moving" :)
    and i loved this poem so much i wish i could eat it! :D

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  44. @Everyone- Thanks for your wishes and comments. I am awed by the response for my guest post. I would also like to apologize for late reply and not visiting your blogs(I'm moving to another city.) Hope to be regular on blogosphere, once I'm settled.

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