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Saturday, July 9, 2011

Je t'aime - II


Was drifted away with ecstasy, rubbed and erased all fears,
As he was coming to me, he would have been near.
I waited for this July, like no one has waited before,

And I loved him always, with each passing moment even more.
Now, hopes are drifting away, reading his latest letter twice,
Is maintaining this relation by any means wise?
Should I wait for him? He needs more time;
They say for love to be true, it has to be one of its kind.
August is not far away, my heart pleaded my mind,
Though deep within I think, Is my love so blind?
The lady in me crave for his embrace,
For my numb soul, this is a hard phase.

Convicted of falling in love, I have to bear this pain.
Consoling my pounding heart, its pleading will not go in vain.

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15 comments:

  1. Hi Saru...well written and composed..you definitely have a way with words :) especially loved the signoff "Convicted of falling in love, I have to bear this pain.Consoling my pounding heart, its pleading will not go in vain." short, crisp an sweet :)

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  2. hey ur writin is really nice....its a short poem but has so much contained in it

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  3. superb.. i read both d parts nd its awesome.. :)

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  4. @India's no. 1 blog- The couplet is my favorite part too. I tried to structure the poem in a sonnet.

    @Amrita ray parida, @Dr Monica & @popsie- Thanks a lot!

    @Ms. Holla- Thanks for reading both the parts, reading them together brings out the beauty of this love story.

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  5. Love is such a powerful force and you've captured it here, I enjoyed your poemyour poem

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  6. Love is the most Powerful and still Most Unknown Energy in the World... Awesome words, keep it up... :) ♥

    http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/

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  7. @Poetic Soul- Thanks.

    @Jay- Yeah Jay, the Love Guru( This is after that stubborn guy post).

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  8. WONDERFUL WRITING
    1ST TIME HERE VERY NIE POSTS I HAVE FOOD BLOG DO VISIT AND FOLLOW IF LIKE

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  9. @Santosh Bangar, @magiceye and @SUB- Thanks.

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  10. Your words run way deep.
    Meaningful,Soulful and Beautiful Indeed!! :)

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  11. @Risha Kalra- Nice writeup in the comment itself:)
    Thanks Dear.

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